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A weekend of firsts. I can definitely say that the first time I decided to go to Mayagüez was memorable, but not entirely for the best reasons. Although I had gone before to help my boyfriend move I'm talking about the first time decided to go overnight. First of all I had asked permission, was denied and decided to go against my mother and go anyway (a first). While riding la Linea Sultana (a first) my heart was beating fast still hearing her last words in my head "Whatever happens over there, it's on you. Don't count on me for help". By the time I got there I was calmer and ate dinner with my boyfriend and his housemates (a first), one of them that later on brought us yummy ice cream which as always makes things better. After a quiet night away from the metropolitan area and a nice breakfast I told my boyfriend to take me to a beauty parlor so I could get my hair done before going back. 
On our way there while stopped behind a garbage truck I saw a sports car drive by at high speed then shortly after, all I heard was the undeniable sound of car metal against car metal and felt myself with the whole car move forward. Confused I looked around and saw my boyfriend had hit himself against the driving wheel and was lying against the seat. I got out of the car, ran to over to him and checked that he was alright. Then seeing the damage of the car, both front and back, I began crying and apologizing thinking that everything that had happened was somehow my fault. After the paramedics arrived, information was exchanged, parents were contacted and the car was towed to his apartment my boyfriends housemate took us to the hospital where we waited inhaling that sterile hospital scent that I've come to love as a student but hate as a patient. Afterwards because the driver that hit us didn't have a license with him or a valid one for that matter we ended up having to go to Mayagüez court until finally resolving the issue in January 2013. 
After all was said and done the weekend of September 14-15, 2012 was a weekend of many firsts. The first time I defied my mother, went to Mayagüez overnight, made and had dinner for my boyfriend in his apartment, had a serious car accident, went to a Mayagüez hospital and later on went to court. I learned so much from this weekend, became closer to my boyfriend and had a new appreciation of the blessing it was since it could have gone a lot worse. After this I've had many other trips to the west side that were memorable for a lot better reasons, thank God!

Alanna
10/14/2013 02:29:26 pm

OMG OMG OMG!! I love the picture!! <3

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Alanna
10/24/2013 02:43:26 am

Your first trip to Maya sounds soo stressful but I'm pretty sure that at the end it was worth it, plus you and your boyfriend face a challenge as a couple that brought the two of you even closer.

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Frances Adorno
10/25/2013 05:04:29 am

WOW!!! you are definitely not going to forget that weekend, you have to put commas when making more than one point in a sentence. But other than that you're writing is okay.

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Nina
10/26/2013 03:29:06 pm

Hahaha, that was funny to read! U have to use commas in some sentences there and January 2014? We're still on 2013! haha

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Selena Marie
10/27/2013 01:18:05 am

Thank you for that! I should really proof read before posting.

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Alba
10/27/2013 10:43:22 am

Oh my gosh, that sounds nerve-racking. I liked reading your post, but, like others mentioned before me, there are a few commas missing. Other than that, it was good!

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Angel
10/28/2013 07:49:29 pm

Hahaha omg, im sorry but in some point I always enjoy your readings because you make the most sad thing in a funny way. Im sorry about what happened, but like I always say now to my younger friends, LISTEN TO YOUR MOM!!! ps: you should put some space between the paragraphs.

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10/29/2013 02:44:55 am

Wow! Really great post entry! I love the details you put into it like exactly what your mother said to you (I felt like I was listening to her say it) and when you said "took us to the hospital where we waited inhaling that sterile hospital scent that I've come to love as a student but hate as a patient." I'm guessing you want to be a doctor? Keep up the good work!!

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Fafi Jordan
11/19/2013 01:38:27 am

I definitely agree with Angel's comment. I don't know why I started laughing! It was so tragic that it was comical and very fun to read. It was almost like a children's book with a moral at the end saying don't disobey your parents, but then you quickly fixed it with saying you've had good times at Mayaguez afterwards.
Overall, I'm glad you are alright! I don't see any major corrections- comas and spaces (minor) .

Fafi Scale: 4/5 --> awesome entry!

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