I want you to pick two of the reviews I posted here and write what you liked about that particular review. What elements did the review cover? Do you agree with the author of the review? Why or why not? Would you watch that film? Why? If it was a negative review, why would you stay away from the film? 
Now, look at what you wrote, would it be possible for you to emulate what you just read? Now you will review your own review and focus on those elements you KNOW you can improve! Go ahead...take your chances! 
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The Conjuring
This review was very complete one considering every aspect of the movie separately and commenting on each one. I can agree with the author of the review on many things, my only comment would be that it was a bit extensive going into too much details on some parts. I did watch this film and enjoyed it although it was not what I expected and wouldn't see it again. 

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Cloudy with a Chance of Meatballs 2
Short, concise and to the point. I really enjoyed reading this review since it was honest and even though it was negative it did not completely put you off to the movie. I liked how it did some comparisons to other movies just in case the reader has not seen that particular one they have something to go on. I haven't seen this movie so I can't say I agree or disagree but I know that many of the things mentioned in the review are reasons why I chose to not watch it.

Reviewing my review... 
After reading the different reviews and commenting on two of them I could notice the parts where my review was lacking. A true movie review should add some basic information about the movie like genre, when it was released, rating, director and cast so that the reader can look up some information on it or if they are a movie guru know the director and decide whether the movie was up to his/her standards or not. Also commenting on the different aspects of the movie seems to be a must, I do think in comparison mine was very superficial. Many of the movie reviews I read included a specific quote or memorable moment of the movie without spoiling it which is something I think could be edited in mine. In conclusion I think my movie reviews were a bit superficial in comparison to what I now know to be a correct review.
Frances Adorno
10/25/2013 05:13:15 am

I commented on the same reviews as you did, and I agree with you on The Conjuring one, but with the other one I did not like it because it gave me like a summary.

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Jesse ^_^
10/30/2013 09:17:22 am

I agreed with you about The Conjuring. I like the way you write in all your post. Very concise and to the point. Great job!!! :)

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